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NamelessOne
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0 posted 2000-04-14 01:45 AM


Grin

When you smile the world gets brighter
When you grin my troubles give in
When you laugh it doubles me in half
When you`re there i haven`t got a care
But to make you grin again and again


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1 posted 2000-04-14 01:48 AM


short, sweet, and to the point
i likes

Jeffrey

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2 posted 2000-04-14 01:48 AM


yuh there's nuttin better than makin the opposite sex smile...liked this one i did
NamelessOne
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3 posted 2000-04-14 01:54 AM


thanks you guys
netswan
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4 posted 2000-04-14 02:13 AM


Ah, nameless one.  How sweet.
I love it.


 Teresa King
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5 posted 2000-04-14 02:44 AM


Need a friend like you, lovely, 'nameless'--speaks such generosity of spirit....thanks.
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6 posted 2000-04-14 06:56 PM


Smile and the world smiles with you...wonderfully uplifting!
kynder
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7 posted 2000-04-19 06:43 PM


is this about your kids?  nothing like a child's laughter.  falls to the earth like glitter from an angel's wings!!!  if not, you are still cool. but who makes you grin?

*****kynder

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8 posted 2000-04-21 04:10 PM


Very sweet, Nameless .....  
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