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My Dearest Dad
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My Dearest Dad |
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GAngel2212 Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 21 |
The pain I am feeling now The hurt of you being gone I hope I wull overcome my obstacles, but without you I don't know how I want to hear your voice again rejoicing like a song. You were always there for me Through thick and thin, loose or win When I was down you picked me up again With you, right now, is where I want to be. We've had so many good times together Traveling here and there You'll always be with me forvere Though the lose of you I cannot bear. I wish that you'd be able to see me on my Wedding Day The hurt I'm feeling now is very hard to say Right now it's gloomy, dark, and gray But if you where here it would be a sunny day. Dad, I cannot stand alone I need your hand to hold I want to see your smile I dont want to see the cold. I have so many memories of you Pictures, trips, Elroy stories and more Right now I'm feeling blue I'm broken and my heart is torn. I'm sorry for all the calls I hadn't returned I'm sorry for all the fights This will be the hardest day I have ever learned. I'm sorry for saying I was to busy I wish I saw you instead I'm sorry for not seeing you on all the holidays I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry. I'm sorry for being so greedy I'm sorry for yelling at you I'm sorry for not coming to see you But now it's too late and already through. I wish you could have lived with me Until this dying day Every night before I go to sleep For you, I will surly pray. I wish that I could touch you I wish you were alive I wish I could have told you again I love you and good-bye. I love you Dad Always and forever Please look down on me So we will never tether. When my day comes, Hopefully not for a while We will all be together In the magic land. ~GAngel2212~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
GAngel -- Heart warming and heart felt. Take heart -- this kind of pain does fade with time. Your father forgives you, and loved you just for you. No one is perfect and we don't always say - or do what we should have done and we all remorse what was too late; its a painful lesson in life and we learn from these sad rememberances. Think of the wonderful times you had together instead --- and someday along the road you two will meet again. netswan. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I agree with netswan, this is a very powerful piece. Just have faith that you will one day meet again. Jeffrey |
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GAngel2212 Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 21 |
Netswan- Thank you very much for your reply. I am grieving at this time but I know again in heaven I will be with my Father....thank you for your reply. |
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