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Frank Bucciero
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 5


0 posted 2000-04-16 04:39 AM



I gotta, Gotta move,
but i can't seem to find a way out of this grove.

Why does it seem to me,
the only thing I want to be,
can't seem to find a way to be with me,

I know what i did was wrong,
I can see it oviously,
All i'm asking you is,
to please forgive me

Just please give me the time to cool the heat,
I never said you would cheat,

It aint what it ment to be,
I remember all the things you said to me,
can't you remember how much you ment to me,
I can't change what was said or what was done,
I honest to god thought you were the one,
we had lots of fun,
I know this can't be done,
If you realy loved me you would forgive me,
I never lied to thee,

And when i say these words,
i mean it,
I blew it,
But we can do it,
I need you,
I can't be with out you,
and this comes from the heart,
and these words can never be torn apart,
I love you,
i take them from my heart,
and place them in your hand,
if you give it back i can understand,
To me this is the whole beach,
please dont take this like a grain of sand,

We were so close to say that now its out of reach,
so lets,
grab it,
fix it,
and,
I love you!!!


Frank Bucciero

 

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2000-04-16 04:49 AM


WOW! Welcome to passions!!!! Be able to say I am sorry and meaning it is being humble, which deserves a second chance and forgiveness!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com



Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
2 posted 2000-04-16 04:58 AM


This is so beautifully, tenderly real. Rarely is found such honesty.  I hope everything works out well for you.

Lone Ranger
Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil
3 posted 2000-04-16 12:53 PM


Truly honest...
When I read it , it felt like you have read my mind or something...


 

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 2000-04-16 01:23 PM


A wonderful pouring out of the soul ....
I hope you get that second chance, Frank .....
Welcome to Passions .....  

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-04-16 02:07 PM


Frank,
Welcome to Passions.  Good writing here.  Sorry for your pain, but hope it works out for you.  Good luck!!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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