Open Poetry #6 |
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Dreaming |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Do You Believe In Dreams? Have you ever had a dream From which you didn't wanted to wake up? I bet you did But have you had a dream That you didn't wanted to have? Not because it was terrible, Or bad , but because You know it only happens in dreams Today I had a dream I dreamt I was beside you I dreamt I was happy with you I dreamt to love I don't know if I can As I don't even know you I just know you exist And you're looking for me As I'm looking for you What can I do to find you? I've tried everything , but You didn't showed up Why do you hide from me? Why don't you appear? I need you so much... ...The moonlight is hitting my face On the window... It's night I start thinking about you How you are , how you speak , how you look at me... But it's not real! It's only a reverie , a daydream. But I know! That you exist , I know! A soul in the crowd Who comprehend me Who can give me care Who understands me But where are you? I've looked everywhere I could For you , I would go to the infinite But where are you So you can see that my love for you Is so endless as the world around us You , are a drop in the ocean Unbounded , blue , until the horizon And I , am a sand grain From an enormous beach without an end I look at the ocean, So distant from me I imagine how you look You eyes , your hair, Your care , your... love But when I'm back in reality I see the distance between us Sad vastness , with no guilt Prevents the joy between two beings Who love without knowing Without meeting Without seeing How can I live with this? I know one day I'll find you, But when? I've waited too long And I'm in a hurry to live... By your side... In the stars I see The gracious outline of your face It's hard to identify , for I've never seen But I dreamt I spent my life waiting While I look at the sky And I see the moonlight shining at my face Enlighten , oh Moon My hope That one day I'll find her And with her I forever will be Happy... I don't know if I believe in my dream I don't know if I can dream again As I dreamt , When I dreamt with you Controversial ideas Confused thoughts Awaken dreams I think I lost my sense Or I never had it , As I never had you... I thought that maybe I could find you Again in a dream And hope that you dream about me So finally we could Even that only in a dream See each other! Now I believe in dreams I believe I can be happy Because I know that you too Are looking for me And you're dreaming! [This message has been edited by Lone Ranger (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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FreeSoul Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 14 |
I can relate...nice poem. Im looking forward to more in the future. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now these are words that I have heard-- if only in my sweetest dreams. This one gave me quite a start-- as you have penned my naked heart... Thank you for this...lovely, lovely reverie. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
very nice, I could relate as well!I could feel your deepest emotions in this, Great poem. ![]() "Love is not love, till you give it away" [email protected] |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Tender, lonely and yearning this poem is. You must be a very loving person. I enjoyed it very much! Just lovely. I hope this dream comes true for you very soon. She probably IS out there somewhere, dreaming of you - I wouldn't be a bit surprised. |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Thank you all for reading this poem!! I hope it touches as many hearts as it can! I wrote from the deepest maze of my heart And it's truly everything that I feel at this moment! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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Jeffrey Carter![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I felt your pain as well. I firmly believe that there is someone out there for each of us, just don't give up on your search you will find that someone one day. Jeffrey |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Jefrey you're right! I'll follow your advise because we can never give up! thanks "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have often thought that our dreams help us decide what the person we desire will look like or who they will be...our ideal. The people we look at that stand out in a crowd are familiar to us thru our hopes and dreams. James |
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