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FreeSoul
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since 2000-04-15
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0 posted 2000-04-16 12:30 PM


It was not long ago that these two met
   Though friends, it seems, they have been forever
Each other, now, they will never forget
   It seems they will always be together

Sometimes road blocks in their may arise
   But in times like these they have each other
Nothing will make them their love compromise
   Their burning coals of love won't be smothered

Whenever it seemed they were fairy tale
   They had to face 'stupid reality'
Each ones emotions were in their own jail
   Hard to express they'd sometimes be

Beautys price is so high, one can't say
But is her beauty a price he can pay?

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-04-16 12:44 PM


Very deep and powerful words here.  I haven't the chance yet, so welcome to Passions FreeSoul!  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil
2 posted 2000-04-16 12:50 PM


Very Deep!!
It actually changed my point of view!!

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