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Open Poetry #6

Dining on Myself

zipknee
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 35
Oak Park, IL

0 posted 2000-04-15 08:58 AM

I have swallowed myself
drank every last bit of soul
filled my insides with emotion
I have sucked in my tears
to quench my thirsty spirit
I have filled myself so full
sometimes I can't even breathe
I let anger digest the hurt
I consume pieces of happiness
to compress the morsels of sadness
when the insides become too full
I express a few simple thoughts
to make room for the complex ones
I nibble on my fears for a while
to make them easier to swallow
even after consuming all this
I must swallow the bullsh*t of others too.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-04-15 09:15 AM

This is one for refrigerator, yes?

Seriously, luv--I do love this...deep...
the expression flowed here....thanx.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-04-16 05:23 PM

Hi Zipknee

This is so neet, I have found myself doing this trying to pack more in then take on evry body else's too, very good job with this one.

Cerenity

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