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Night Succumbs |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Night succumbs To days embrace Winds song becomes Just a trace And in this Quiet I think of you Lavender blue Tears from my eyes Sweet longing are My lonely sighs And with these Tears I cry for you The breeze sweeps Across my face As night succumbs To days embrace And in this Quiet I need you [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 04-15-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, I liked this, I could feel the breeze gently sweeping through it. excellent and i love the design really neat.  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I can't find the words I'm looking for. Awww, you did get one heck of *sigh* though. Sad and sweet, and love them Lavender blue tears! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Well, well...PdV.. I don't know if I should be happy for you or sad for you...Either way this is a very good poem....so sweet it's message...who could resist a plea like that... Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
shhhhh Poet D just wrote the most beautiful poem..its perfect... but she is over there in the lovely quiet of her poem... Ill tell her later how much I loved this.  perfect PD(smile) Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Hushed, lovely, flowing words, PDV. Almost like a gentle whisper...truly beautiful. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderful rendition of the best and most introspective time of day... Nice job, my friend..  |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great Job PDV....wonderful. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
deVine, were you on my balcony last night? This is wonderful. . .I can feel the wind and see the pinks and lavenders meshing into a final red of last light. . . Excellent!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Perfectly lovely--soft and sweet with longing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ There's a hush in this that speaks your heart. Just lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Sharon! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is sweet, yet sad. I love the colors!! Great job and creative layout. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I felt goose bumps, it was so sweeping, and vivid, and flowing. Kathleen |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
poetdevine, are you also in every poet? this is an amasingly beautiful poem, i'll check out your other things as well. seriouly lovely and true and smooth reading. thank you for your words kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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