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Sir Real and the Knights of Illusion (part two "Non Compos Mentis")
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Sir Real and the Knights of Illusion (part two "Non Compos Mentis") |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Percieved through the veil Dormant of Flourish Mis-concieved , un-assailed of Portent to be nourished The Knights of Illusion from battle hard fought In plight of confusion as prattle their thoughts Perverse Apparitions on Capricious Steeds Accursed with Ambition Ignitious of Deeds Deploy Concentration Pre-cursor of Wit Envoy of Salvation dispersed as befits Once drawn by the page Sir Real's apprentice A pawn as presaged found " Non Compos Mentis " |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love this!!! Good job...I feel the urge to write something like this..thanks for the inspiration..  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow, Dr. Moose, this is great! I really like it. You have done an excellent job with the use of the english language. Teresa King |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
PDV, Actually , as said before , inspiration is from , those who'd have more . This one was tougher , than the first ,had to get " Big Book " , to finish the verse . Netswan, Glad you enjoyed , pretty new format to me ,working around double rhymes within each stanza , don't even know if there's a recognized term for this . Maybe some-one can tell me ? |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Now you know that I'm a staunch proponent of the "Big Book"... Nice job Sir Antlers...  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
I will shame myself no more Doc |
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