Sir Real and the Knights of Ilusion

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Open Poetry #6

Sir Real and the Knights of Ilusion

Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2000-04-13 03:28 PM

Majestic realms once peopled
of plain ordinary folk
Expectant land illumined
by imagination stoked

Fires of some inner forge
with precision smelted sight
March forth the first division
of illusionary knights

They approach the field of battle
"Sub-concious" by the Id
An ominous land divided
by Lord Sir Real's bid

Intrepid armies clash
horrendous is the sound
Valiant efforts all expire
to litter this , their battle ground

Effigy
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1 posted 2000-04-13 03:31 PM

Very nice. i enjoyed it greatly.

Denise

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2 posted 2000-04-13 03:47 PM

So is this the cause of my writer's block perhaps? LOL Great poem, Dr. Moose! I enjoyed this very much!

Denise

Andrew Scott
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3 posted 2000-04-13 05:41 PM

Doc... you been sampling the meds out of your bag again... cause if so, throw some my way. A very fine vision here. See ya at Area 51 and bring your secret decoder ring... the cat blinks Morris code and I've had one to many gin and tonics. hick'

Poet deVine

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4 posted 2000-04-13 07:42 PM

I think you should do a series! I like this type of poem very much..there is an 'old world' quality to it...

Jeffrey Carter

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5 posted 2000-04-13 11:19 PM

I agree with PdV. a series it should be

Jeffrey

Dr.Moose1
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6 posted 2000-04-14 06:18 AM

Effigy,
Glad you liked
D,
When all your aspirations fall short of the mark, it may be worse than writer's block .Thanks
Drew,
Hey save some of that gin for me !!!
PDV,& Jeffery ,
Funny ,but after writing this , I thought of the same thing , and decided to see if someone else would suggest it .Coming soon to a screen near you ...thanks Doc

Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 2000-04-15 11:29 PM

Pardon my shame-less promotion of these two , but I thought that if I bumped them together they might make more sense
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 04-15-2000).]

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