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Janet Marie
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0 posted 2000-04-14 04:53 PM


~Once Touched By You~


Your touch is like oxygen ...
it alone allows me to breathe.
You are all I require,
You are all I receive.
Like the miracle of morning rain,
allows a fragile rose to grow ...
Like the warmth of the midday sun,
your touch grants my inner glow.
I feel your essence ever near ...
I inhale and take you in.
Your touch grants my existence,
now no longer able to see ... where you end ... and I begin.


Janet Marie


4- my P.I.R. (smile)



 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



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RSEvans
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1 posted 2000-04-14 04:56 PM


beautiful
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 2000-04-14 05:03 PM


Taking a deep breath!

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-04-14 05:04 PM


Very Very Beautiful!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Parker
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4 posted 2000-04-14 05:13 PM


Janet, this is very very nice. loved the read, and I think so will your Mr. P.I.R

Parker

Aimster
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5 posted 2000-04-14 05:46 PM


jan

as always poetry in motion! this was simply beautiful. your partner in rhyme is one lucky person! take care and i love ya.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Marina
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6 posted 2000-04-14 05:50 PM


Beautiful Jm, as always.

Marina

David2
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7 posted 2000-04-14 06:41 PM


Janet,  
    This was very lovely, I enjoyed reading it immensely.
              David2

Jeffrey Carter
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8 posted 2000-04-14 06:42 PM


(sigh)

Jeffrey

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2000-04-14 08:25 PM


Perfectly lovely!! An amazing poem...  
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2000-04-14 08:45 PM


JM,
Beautiful for sure!!  I am sure the it is for will think so too.  Best wishes to you both!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

gemini shadow
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11 posted 2000-04-16 10:09 PM


nice poem full of contentment
which is very good for inspiration
lucky lady to be so content
gemini

 I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes
I want to be the touch you need every single night
I want to be your fantasy
And be your reality
And everything between
I want you to need me,
like I need you.
celine dion

WhiteNite
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12 posted 2000-04-16 10:23 PM


[in the taco bell dog's voice] I think I'm in love... =)

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)


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13 posted 2005-01-23 09:38 PM


Some people search a lifetime for the feeling of where they end and the love of their life begins.  I gave up searching but for beautiful poems such as this.  Lovely JM.

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