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A Withered Heart
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A Withered Heart |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
A Withered Heart From Whither my heart lies within its dreams of nights of enchantments and days of romancing From Whither my heart dreams lie within a world of cozy hopings that into the night lost upon the rising moon And withered, my heart lies broken and shattered as a mirror on superstition and the moon fades into dusk The sun rises, and my heart lies torn in a myriad of ill shapened pieces within the pain of long lost love and schemes and unrealistic dreams From withered my heart shall grow a strength to brush myself off into life's precious days of which I sow Yet, growing fewer as they pass on And I shout to the skies leave my heart be, for I only have one to give and that one was not free Then in a haze of misty eyed days he walked in like a cozy fire and cast upon me to trust again and I laid my heart at his desire Trusting upon him like a loyal dog my eyes full of hope and I left the shattered one behind upon my breast And now from withered my heart I lay my throbbing pain Risking a new start Repaired and untouched by that long lost lover Teresa King www.tipsfortop.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Amazingly intimate expression of emotions Very well written Jeffrey |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
netswan--this unfolded so poignantly--lovely and so sad...wish I could not relate...open heart surgery here...beautiful. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Lovely poetry yet again, the way you write is truly great, and all your poetry is so deep and honest and meaningful . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey Loved this one too  Well Done!What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Teresa! Well done! Denise |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Very touching, Teresa - you go, girl!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ditto!!!! I think it's all been said. I liked! |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Love is the only risk worth taking. David2 |
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