Open Poetry #6 |
**Within The Depths of You** |
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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This is dedicated to my boyfriend Jeff. Tomorrow, April 14th is our 9 month anniversary. I love you honey. Tender dewdrops of emotion Slide upon golden skin As tears purged in heartache Flood with love again. A gently flowing whisper Traced upon the night Offers such peaceful solace From this blinded plight. In shaky dreams I caught you Within my yearning arms And when chilled dawn did rise Your love kept me warm. And when a gaze turned to forever The world began to glow With a newly sparkling flame Of eternity beginning to grow. I've never felt so safe As when within the depths of you Nor ever wanted more badly For our love to stay simply true. You have my trust through time And my love forevermore For upon glittered wings of fate We are destined to always soar. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
You soar girl! This is divine, and I am so happy for you two! You're very lucky...Beautiful tribute to such a special day! Catch a breeze for me, will ya, while you're up there!?!?! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
How's the weather up there? Sure wish I knew! Jeffrey |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Krista This was beautiful. Thanks. And lucky you! Teresa King www.tipsfortop.com |
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Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Congratulations, Krista. May love always hold you true. Michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is really beautiful Alwye Congratulations!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
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"As tears purged in heartache Flood with love again." You know, I love what you're saying in this line. This is a beautiful dedication to your love, Krista. ~ Claire |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a beautiful love poem! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is sooo sweet Krista...Happy 9 from me too!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
There is nothing so sweet as love growing within such a tender heart. My congratulations, also. Rich |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful poem Krista! I'm happy for you and Jeff, so strong through it all. Happy belated 9 months, and many more of love I do hope Abrahm Simons "...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together" |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Wow!! I just fell in love with this poem!! Tell me something , is your boyfriend a jealous guy? You're truly a joy , you must be a lovely person!! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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Denise
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Congratulations, Krista! I wish you both the best! Denise |
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