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Resistance Fading
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Again, there she was With a beauty dark, and brooding A certain singular somethingness Of confidence exuding Seeming as if one with the night Her pale arms reaching, protruding Deathless, her mask to wear Ever beckoning me along With no emotion emanating But a telepathic siren’s song Guiding me, leading the way Convincing me this could be wrong Once, not long ago I would have been able to resist But now her grip on me, I feel the pull How unceasingly does she insist As I follow her into that dark and lonely place, I know full well, I will not resist |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ "I know full well, I will not resist" Ohhh, I do love the way you write. (more.......)-SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Again, there she was With a beauty dark, and brooding A certain singular somethingness Of confidence exuding Seeming as if one with the night Her pale arms reaching, protruding ------------------ Once, not long ago I would have been able to resist But now her grip on me, I feel the pull How unceasingly does she insist As I follow her into that dark and lonely place, I know full well, I will not resist ---------------- your timing is impeccable..(smile) sometimes resistance is futile... but the rewards ... sweet I'll follow you anywhere  stalking you still without resistance,*S* your jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow, this is great, I haven't had much time in passion's of late, but I stop by and read and find some really great stuff like this...and it makes me wonder how many more are slipping by unread by my eyes....glad I read this one  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ooooohhh...I liked this - it's almost like the man is offering up his body/soul to a vampiress! He knows he's gonna die, but he still can't say NO....Enticing piece here, makes me want to go out and "hunt" somebody down! LOL  |
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gemini shadow Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70the mystic |
who could resist? not i gemini I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes I want to be the touch you need every single night I want to be your fantasy And be your reality And everything between I want you to need me, like I need you. celine dion |
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