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More than Moonlight
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More than Moonlight |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
More than Moonlight It was more than moonlight when i was in it`s glow with you it was more than a car ride when it was just us two Basking in the sunlight of your summer day smoothed out my raging sea taking my troubles away there was life in the music laughter in the air a flutter in my heart impossible not to stare the flowers smelled sweeter water was as wine there was an urgency to life everything seemed to shine But now i`m out of your favor and the roses only scorn the moon won`t come out the colors seem to mourn i can`t forget how you thrilled me with your casual touch and your smile and your laughter they gave my heart a rush You`ve taken your light from me only darkness, a void so deep my heart thrown into limbo my soul put to sleep i avoid you because i think you do the same i don`t want to look like a fool dagger thrusts of shame stab my gut and twisting turn i`m sorry that i made the mistake i guess i`ll never learn it`s just the one`s before never gave me such pain it`ll be a long time before i forget you i just hope not as long before i`m sane |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nameless~ I love this..... made my heart ache.....-SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
NamelessOne, Good lines, good paint, good poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oohh...like a caterpillar...lovely but stings a bit...much beauty here...thank you.h |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is very good nameless yur a must read i say All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I can certainly feel your pain. Live life for today Jeffrey |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
thanks one and all for your kind words |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Sweet aching pain. I do hope that you learned something from this lovely poem --) Well done. Teresa King |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - this is great. A lot of powerful deep truths here. Good job. Michael |
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marty11 New Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 5Lubbock, Texas |
Man I'm glad to have found this place. Its filled with a bunch of great people and great poetry. I can really relate to your poem, I loved it!!! Marty |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
once again, your words echo the feelings in my veins. i thought it was you that said it was the insanity that drove us...... but maybe rest stops are nice, eh? *****kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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