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WhiteNite
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0 posted 2000-04-13 09:49 AM


-- A little kiss of passion --  (4-12-2000)

Is your kiss authentic
Do I have the only one
Or is it just an action
Shared with others just for fun

A kiss isn't a reservation
Made only with your lips
You can do it holding hands
Just by tightening your grip

I can kiss you with my eyes
Just by staring deep
I can kiss you with my words
And sweep you off your feet

I can kiss you without motion
With only my warm embrace
I can kiss you with the soft caress
Of my fingers on your face

You see a kiss should show affection
And I do prefer your lips
But they're only part of the fraction
It's the emotions that I miss

Some kisses are simply gestures
A tradition developed over time
Some are just reminders
That I'm yours and your mine

A kiss can be an action
Some are created in lust
But I want a kiss of passion
And it requires that you trust

A kiss with no emotions
It's almost like a sin
Like poison on a rose
Or the betrayal of a friend

Just be sure that when we kiss
It's something that you feel
If it's just an action
Then it wasn't very real

--Dave


 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)



© Copyright 2000 Dave - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-04-13 10:07 AM


Oh...I do like that type of kiss  
Jeffrey Carter
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2 posted 2000-04-13 10:12 AM


Absolutely splendid writing...this one should be published

Jeffrey

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-04-13 10:27 AM


I can kiss you with my eyes
Just by staring deep
I can kiss you with my words
And sweep you off your feet

I can kiss you without motion
With only my warm embrace
I can kiss you with the soft caress
Of my fingers on your face

You see a kiss should show affection
And I do prefer your lips
But they're only part of the fraction
It's the emotions that I miss
---------------
A kiss can be an action
Some are created in lust
But I want a kiss of passion
And it requires that you trust

A kiss with no emotions
It's almost like a sin
Like poison on a rose
Or the betrayal of a friend
------------

this is even more perfect by morns light(smile)

I forsee lots of puckering in here LOL

and just to make it official... you do realize, you can no longer claim poetic block. (BIG SMILE)

way cool davey-boy...way
jm



 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 2000-04-13 03:45 PM


My kisses are as dew
they are here to wet your lips -
I believe that you were thirsty
thus I kissed your fingertips...
A kiss to me, is comfort
for it calms a trembling soul -
I've not a label for it,
Passion's kisses make me whole.


Working on a reply back to those brown eyes of yours, BTW!  Sorry, just my 2 cents up there...


Denise
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5 posted 2000-04-13 04:02 PM


Beautiful poem! Very lovely, Dave!

Denise

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-04-13 04:47 PM


Oh yes those kisses of passion...I desire only the authentic ones.  James
TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
7 posted 2000-04-13 04:56 PM


Dave,
     Very impressive poem.  I love the emotion and the truth in this one.  And the truth is surely there.  I wish more people would think like this!!!!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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