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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-04-13 03:05 AM



A never ending circle

inside two hearts beating as one

A veil of white separating the hope for today

and the dream of  tomorrow

a pledge freely given sealed with a kiss
a march side by side to the dream of the future
a shower of rice
and petals

announcing for all to see                                                                                                                    
this is love today

yesterday

and tomorrow


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Rose Petal
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 52
WVa. USA
1 posted 2000-04-13 03:47 AM


Eye, you did a wonderful job here,love must be in the air from all the poems I'veread lately on passions.
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-04-13 06:51 PM


Hi Eyesplus2,

This was wonderful, Iloved the simple truth of the poem, because a day like this can be so busy.
Cerenity

tickle tickle
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since 2000-04-03
Posts 7

3 posted 2000-04-14 01:21 AM


the day of days.....
the panic, the tears, the joy the laughter,
the love

if you ask...
if you get a yes....
will you cope with the day?
i love your poem eyes...

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