Open Poetry #6 |
Why? |
DragonFire New Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 7 |
Why why dare to dream when all your dreams can be shattered with a single blow life is unkind to those who dream can i lock my mind to keep them out why dare to care caring can only cause you pain with a single word your heart can break tears follow caring can i lock my heart and seal it tight why dare to want lonliness and yearning are all you get a body never satisfied passion consuming your soul can i lock my desires and never feel again why dare to hope spirits raised only to tumble down to sore and crash again and again leaving you hopeless can i lock my wishes away and forget why dare to be to exist in a world that is unkind why take that risk the pain is so great can i lock my soul and cease to be why dare to be me to dream, to care, to hope to desire, to be...why? because someone is calling and i can hear a soul who is searching....for me Catherine |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Don't even have words now--you wrote them all there for me...very moved by this Catherine, much gratitude...Nice, nice work. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I used to ask the same question, why? Now I prefer to ask Why not?. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Great reply from EagleOne and I agree~ Excellent poem Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi DragonFire, Daring to live life is a challenge to everyone at one point or another but life can give some very sweet rewards. Welcome to passions, Cerenity |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is so beautiful, that's why!!! Kathleen |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I am inclined to agree with Eagle one and I think this is a great place to ask such a question Jeffrey |
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