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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
It time to fly [This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh , what a lovely poem you write Welcome to a new bunch of friends. You will love it here. Jeffrey |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Hmm... beutiful work.. do I see a hidden message in there? Or maybe it's only hidden to me. I see a statement about dreaming and singing of being in love, although you've got no partner and thus no wings to fly... one of those "I'm not going to let it get me down" attitudes... I love it. But then it's probably just a pretty poem about a bird in a cage. BTW, welcome to Passions. Keep on writing, your work is music to my ears.< !signature--> "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) [This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
This poem has a hidden message, it is a metaphor for all who have or are trying to excell and rise to to new heights, despite lifes obstacles. For me that is. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Welcome to Passions!! I relate to this well...the butterfly in a jar so to speak. You wrote well capturing many feelings with few words. Bravo! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Thank you all for that warm welcome, just testing the waters. Never placed any poems on line before. I'm like a newborn, everything is new. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special message. I enjoyed your poem and hope you'll feel like posting again...our guidelines are in the links on the question mark icon on the side of the forum...have fun!  |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***lady web, firstly, welcome to passions.you will settle in perfectly with your talent. secondly, clipped wings or no, you WILL excell.  a fantastic entry into the passions family. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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