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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-12 07:27 PM


Lilting lore

Well come as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?
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[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).]

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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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1 posted 2000-04-13 12:28 PM


I love it when you write love poems!  And yes, there's something about loving through years - I love that part about "still holding the others hand they walk the miles of corridors stealing kisses" - ah, honey, I'll still be trying to steal a kiss when we're ninety.

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2 posted 2000-04-15 05:46 PM


Whew !  Lucky ME~
Found this one about to slip into
oblivion .... much too pretty and
sentimental for that.

To the top of the heap
for others to enjoy.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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3 posted 2000-04-15 07:19 PM


Thanks to Marge I got to enjoy this too! I love the format of the hour glass. This is so well said. I think this really touching  
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-04-20 08:23 AM



~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com     

Martie
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5 posted 2006-04-20 12:29 PM


Dale...I'm glad Marge brought this back up as I never saw it before.  What a play on words you are...and may I add, very clever!!!
  I hope all is well with you and RG.  How about a letter?

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