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Not Quite Yet Born
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Not Quite Yet Born < !signature-->pain breathes controllably lying defenseless near your arms welcomes as I was in courage by a fiend to be gone this journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you into a piece full come for table ground but if you no thing like me you be tried of the same mold contempt or airy voids that sneaks to glory fly woke gather then tall ants which draft tick ally skewers art and graces such in dived level souls with the drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart con trash to ease kind of odor ease very same will not rest pond to a poets rule of dumb which pears to be just act ally what they lethal ridge ally cordon wit newt protest or sin sure as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough will fat make it add mire able odor I weight for the voids to rule ball looming nocturne ally true in neat..? [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Lucky - this made me cry, as it would any parent. I think I'll give my 8-month-old daughter an extra kiss as she takes her nap. Thank you so much for sharing this poignant and obviously deeply personal poem!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky, my heart hurts from reading the tender tears of this poem. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, sweetheart, thank you for writing of this sorrowful part of our lives, in such beautiful, tender words; and thank you even more for your love. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ April Dawn ... what a beautiful name. Tears here at your thoughtfulness. The love between you and Rosemary is so touching. I know that your losses have been many ... and the treasures precious. May God hold you both in his tender mercy. You are beautiful people. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***lucky, i agree with marge, april dawn is an exquisite name. this poem deserves praise also. it is very brave of you to post such a deeply personal piece here. thankyou for doing so. touching as it rips your heart out.  fantastic. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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