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short poem....... sorry about the wrong name before!!!
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short poem....... sorry about the wrong name before!!! |
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star 15 Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26 |
here is a little poem i made up when i was board by the way sorry about the wrong name before!! the light turned red the sky was blue i stood ther wating and i didn't know what to do. i look to my left i look to my right there were no cars in sight i was suddnley now whee to be seen the lingt turned green. [This message has been edited by star 15 (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Star 15, This is great, these kind of poems are fun. Welcome to Passions, hope to see more of your work. Cerenity |
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rojogrande Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 29Fullerton, CA, USA |
Lovely. Don't hate me for this, I mean I'm only 17, however last I checked, a Haiku was only 3 lines and 17 syllables. However, the poem itself was good just not listed correctly. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Haiku? The read was great but I didn't see a haiku Jeffrey |
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star 15 Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26 |
 sorry guys and girls. I thought it was one but i guess i named it wrong. it is a short poem. Would that be correct? reply if i'm wrong. sorry about the spelling. sincerly, star 15< !signature--> p.s. i'm going to change the name okay!? ha ha [This message has been edited by star 15 (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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