Open Poetry #6 |
2 new haiku |
Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
haiku 009 in the deep of night fluttering of swift dark wings nocturnal birds rise haiku 010 Spring rain falls softly cicadas sing their bold reply - can you hear them? |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Very nice I enjoyed these, seems everybody's getting in the mode for these lately. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful haiku... so simple to write, so difficult to capture the essence... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beki, Great haiku!! Maybe I'll try to do a few some day. Amazing how you can say so much in so little space, isn't it?? |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Esmeralda, Mike and Lone Wolf Is it a trend Esmeralda? I hadn't noticed but do not be decieved by the numbered titles as they only apply to this year. I have written hundreds and published more than 40 in the last 10 years...it is my specialty.I am glad you enjoyed them and yes, Loneewolf, it is amazing how much can be said in an effectively written three line poem |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's always a pleasure to see you grace our poetic walls with your haiku, Beki... I'm glad you're writing again... I need to do the same - Pick up the quill and set it in motion.. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hey Beki, nice writing. Good to see you posting. Thanks for your response also. dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Beki! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beki~ Lovely Haiku. This medium has become a favorite of mine also. Enjoyed very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Nan, Danny (thanks for the email to , my friend , D and Marge. I spent the day at the zoo yesterday, got a lot of writing done look for my upcoming Zoo-ku posts |
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