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Open Poetry #6

Unfinished Dance

Effigy
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since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

0 posted 2000-04-12 12:15 PM

Life and Death stand in a room,
Life with her glass slippers on,
Death with his reapers gone.
Life extends her hand,
and Death accepts it graciously.

The music, it begins to play,
while life and death begin to sway.
Two things together that should not be,
a love of Death,
a life with thee.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-04-12 12:39 PM

Effigy~ this is so neat! Love the images.-SEA

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-04-12 02:28 PM

Ooohhh....very spooky feeling this gives me! Very powerful images in just 2 stanzas! I almost feel "nervous" as they dance! Bravo!

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2000-04-13 12:41 PM

Hi Effigy,

Humanity is obsessed with death yes, but graciously lives life to the fullest before submitting to thee.
This was wonderful, and welcome to passions,

Cerenity

[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-13-2000).]

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