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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-04-12 10:44 AM

The Rhythms of Love

Undertows of ocean’s tide
Bring me nearer to your side
Throbbing heart and quivering breast
In want to soothe the soul’s unrest

Melting into love’s first touch
Drawing close toward lover’s clutch
Warm and tingling sense of skin
Build up rushing waves within

Drumming beats within my ear
Giving birth to blissful tear
Synchronized in rhythm’s mesh
The pulsing throb of wrapping flesh

Wettened lips and fingertips
Are visions of the eye’s eclipse
And taste buds reap the pupil’s sight
Of silken warmth of skin’s delight

Tempos of a thunderous roar
Oozing out of every pour
Pounding heavy in the room
Rock the earth in love’s consume

Drum rolls fluttering through the mind
Tremors sound in murmur’s time
Slowing to a weakened state
Of heart’s contentment in elate

At dawn in early shadows' depth
The rhythm sweet of silent breath
Enveloped in lover’s steep
Softly cradles me to sleep

Elizabeth Santos

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-04-12 11:03 AM

Beautiful rhythms, Elizabeth!!

Denise

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2000-04-12 12:45 PM

Elizabeth,

At dawn in early shadows' depth
The rhythm sweet of silent breath
Envelops me in lover’s steep
But I do not in cradle sleep.

For I in churn and torment yearn,
In depths of distance and concern.
Seek your touch in small reprieve
And dash upon the misconceive.

Love Sy
Your poems are to wonderful for words.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 2000-04-12 01:06 PM

Well. now you've done it , Ms. I'm Too Sexy! ... Hey, will someone, pleae, turn down the air in here .... LOL
Seriously Liz, this is a beautiful piece, that I loved reading ....

[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 04-12-2000).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2000-04-12 01:50 PM

Liz, this is very beautiful, as always.

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 2000-04-12 02:08 PM

You poetry is always so beautifully written.
The title is so apropos, for indeed the rhythm of the piece is perfect.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-04-12 04:25 PM

"Of silken warmth of skin's delight". Enjoyed this very much. James

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2000-04-13 08:42 AM

Beautiful indeed!! Elizabeth (as always)

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2000-04-13 09:57 AM

Absolutely wonderful

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

9 posted 2000-04-13 10:47 AM

Jeffrey

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

10 posted 2000-04-13 10:47 AM

ack...didn't mean to post it twice
Jeffrey

[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 04-13-2000).]

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

11 posted 2000-04-13 11:22 AM

You write so beautifully. Your flow and ryhme scheme was perfect.

Marina

NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

12 posted 2000-04-13 11:25 AM

Fantastic ...umm if i read it again though it`s cold shower time

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

13 posted 2000-04-13 12:55 PM

Hi Liz,

WOW Liz this is beautiful, love what a splended thing.

Cerenity

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