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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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THIS has gone beyond express LOVE? myself put to the test... Why oh why did I allow? Why love? Why trust? Why you? Why now? Why the break of dawn at crypt? Whoever would have dreamt of this? How now, can I have hope, appease? How sweetly must I whimper, "please?" What is it I must do for you? Tell me. Hopeless. I'm in love with you. Now I am fit for nothing else. Linger... lost in lonely hell. Secret of my heart, DO TELL... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Serenity this was original! Just be you! Seems after that we are fit for nothing else until it all wears off and once again we can be us. <*\\\>< YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Why the break of dawn at crypt? Whoever would have dreamt of this? How now, can I have hope, appease? How sweetly must I whimper, "please?" ----------------- what a spendid way to start my day *S* this is so perect girl...so full of your fragile sweet heart and your longing i love this side of you. love this poem too you too *S* take care my serenity sweet jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dovie--thank you--you are indeed a 'luv'-- And unfortunately, THIS IS myself these days...and no, I'm not too sure who that self is...or even who myself WAS...but--if it's about discovery-- I'm game. Janet Marie--me understandin' twin--how much I appreciate your thoughtfulness is, well, beyond express...difficult days, these are, and I know how well you know--a cheeky kiss back atchya! love. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I loved this ... it speaks volumes Jeffrey |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
serenity, there is no secret in any mans heart that will answer your questions here. "Waht is it I must do" - "Do Tell" If love and happiness are not found in you just being you, they will not be found at all. You are precious as you are, never change that for anyone. Michael |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautiful poem serenity ... but as Michael said ... don't you change a thing ... your perfect as you are  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay everybody, c'mon--GROUP HUG!!! |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
I think someone is very lucky to have your heart. If they don't know it already, just whisper it in their ear. Rich |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Serenity! Denise |
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