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A Love Letter Engraved Across Thy Heart
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A Love Letter Engraved Across Thy Heart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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My love, I dream of thy tender kiss, thy soft touch, For I eat of thy words, as food to thy soul, My heart has become withered, as a rose without dew, Mine eyes feast upon the buffet of your soul, needing you, My love, must I endure anymore wait?, the longing to be loved, to be cherished? Your poetry is blood of my veins, Your love, a waterfall,falling all over me,as rain For I am drunk on your wine, Thy words do intoxicate me, Sing your song, from pen and hand, Let your breath, breathe all around me, Must I die, to be inside you? To inhale all that you are? Come to me my love, let us dance lifes dances, Underneath the silken moonlight, My mouth is parched and dry, Begging for thy wet kisses, I beg of thee to answer thy request, Suffering adorns my heart, For ones soul tis not complete, Without the other part, Let the angels of love be in thy mist, Our eyes meet,into loves journey of bliss, Inspiration, my muse, wine unto my vessel, I beg of thy love, Let my love devour thy heart, What must I do? Sing loves tunes, upon thy ear? Cry a river full of tears? My love, whatever the price, the cost, Ten thousand diamonds or more, Your sweet love is worth all, To sail from shore to shore, This poem I leave,while we are apart, A request of thy love, To be loved, A love letter engraved across thy heart. "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes your work simply mesmerizes me. This is one of those times. I can feel the heart yearning behind this. Michael |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Michael..funny you should say that, I was just responding to your poem and I felt the same about you  ...mesmerized,enchanted,mooved,inspired,etc... Thanks...I feel valued, with a compliment like that from a poet like you!!!!"Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Is there any doubt that you are in LOVE???? Beautifully written in the style that is uniquely yours. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Hoot! Danny...I want to be in love like this... Thanks for seeing my style! Ps. this Poem was inspired by another poet on passions...?(Who had written something about silken skin, moonlight) "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soft and tender words that soothe my heart. James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
James your a sweetie! glad to have soothed your heart!"Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
I think we ALL would like to be in love like this. Very beautiful poetry. Rich |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Rich for your lovely reply! I WOULD like to be in love like this? But for now I must dream!"Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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Rose Petal Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52WVa. USA |
RH, I am a true fan of shakespeare,This one caught my eye.Ihaven't got the courage to post yet, but I enjoy reading romantic poems such as this! WOW! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I really liked this one. Good work! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I was just looking around and found this wonderful piece....nicely done!! Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side |
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