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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-04-12 03:02 AM


             The past
       our lives were a mystery
        not knowing just living
        the present our lives our today
     working for an ever fleeting tomorrow
              the future
          alive with endless wonder
               Our love
          full of endless magic
              touching our past
                 our mysteries
              working in our present
       helping us see today and nota fleeting   tomorrow
     going with us in to a endless future
                being our light
                   our map
         for together we are future
          making memories for the past
          loving today in each others arms......




[This message has been edited by eyesplus2 (edited 04-12-2000).]

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-04-12 03:08 PM


Very good poem....thanks for the read.
tickle tickle
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2 posted 2000-04-14 01:31 AM


the past teaches how to let us live in the present so we can survive til the future...

the fears of the past teach us to hide for the future and stay in the present

our love teaches us to look for the future while holding our own past tightly...

may our love hold us together


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3 posted 2000-04-14 01:37 AM


Eyes, I enjoyed this much

Tickle....I agree our past teaches us to live in the present so we can survive til the future

Jeffrey

WhiteNite
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4 posted 2000-04-14 01:41 AM


Very cool.  Thanks for sharing

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)



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5 posted 2000-04-14 10:19 AM


The past still exists shaking today, there are still mysteries to unfold, and tomorrow is only fleeting if you want it to be.
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