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Without You!
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Without You! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Without You! Without you I'm left to walk alone To think alone Everything around me Seems so huge So distant So quiet I miss you More than you know You may not see it And it may not show But need you I really do You fill my days With warmth Like the sunlight rays And with sweet music Softly in my heart It plays Being without you Reminds me of our love How it was sent to me From the Angels above And of how much And how deep My heart you touch Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The love and longing are clearly evident in this one....nice expression of feelings  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey there DA. Well, you know what this did to me already! This is beautiful girl! Very, very touching! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This is sheer beauty of your heart. 'And of how much And how deep My heart you touch' Couldn't have said it better ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How sad and lovely! To love is wonderful and painful at that the same time...good poem DA. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh my friend - this is truly beautiful. Straight from your heart I know. Hugs K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ruth, thank you!! *************** Angel, yes I know, Thank you honey. *************** Marge, thank you so much for your lovely and sweet reply. *************** Sharon Dear, thanks so very much! *************** Kamla, Thankyou Sweet Butterfly. *************** What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is beautiful! Denise |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Dark Angel this is sweet. I really like it. --- ah, love and longing - such a blessing such tender pain. Teresa King |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
DA...your loveliness shows with this one...beautiful |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes, so beautiful, DA ..... I've copied this into my Favorites ... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Dark Angel! Denise |
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Friday New Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 8Vaasa, Finland |
Oh my GOD! This exactly the way I feel it!!!! I love this poem...!!!! Keep up the good work! |
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