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Why So Cruel My Love?
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Why So Cruel My Love? |
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Ella Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 20 |
Can you see me? I'm in your mind. I'm the one you left behind. You took my heart, And part of my soul. Tore it out and left a hole. You abused my mind, You never stop. You always took and I never got. You said you loved me, You told this lie. I was naive and I did buy. Two years ago, You made me whole. You made me woman I gave you that role. Now you come here, And shove in my face. That you have managed to have me replaced. We said we loved, We managed to believe. How we were gullible I'll never concieve. I don't want to see you, I can't believe you asked. How would I get through it? When it's all just a farce? I didn't think you were cruel, Now I understand. She has changed your ways, You are a new man. I don't want to hear you, Just to say hello. I just want to be able to let you go. No tears for you, I will shed. I've got your love, Just not your head. When you want me, Come and say so. Cause although I wont see you, I wont let you go. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ella~ Welcome!  I don't think he is worth your love. Sounds like a jerk...you desirve better!-SEA |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
First of all welcome to passions. You are going to love it here. It's like a big family. I enjoyed your post great writing Jeffrey |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Check your email for a special welcome.... I also agree...this guy is not worthy of you...great poem by the way! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ella~ Welcome to the Passion's family. This is a haunting poem. Sometimes the head says go ... but the heart says NO ! Truthfully ? Listen to your heart ! Hope to see more from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Wow... this is awesome... welcome to Passions. "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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