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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02

Posts 138

0 posted 2000-04-11 05:57 PM

Rain Of Passion

Thine ocean strength takes hold o'er me
as upon thy coast we ride forever to be.
Mine hands griping onto hips of perfection
for thine body a temple of loves infection.

Ye halt thy horse in a sudden jolt of tyranny
my eyes reaching for yours in full sympathy.
Thy energy expressing visional intoxication
leading calmly into unanticipated reciprocation.

Thy sand below us a soft pliable guarantee
to lie our bodies below full moon's balcony.
Our desire's free to explore universal floatation
beyond thy earth's atmospheric realm of creation.

I drown in thy blue sea forever milord's nominee
for only unto thee would I solemnly in love agree.
Taking me deeply within your intriguing fascination
as your rain of passion drenches me in precipitation.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-04-11 06:12 PM

WOW! This is absolutely beautiful! Well done!

Denise

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-04-11 06:49 PM

WOW, I agree,absolutley beautiful!!!
Excellent!!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-04-11 08:41 PM

Beautiful...you got some great words here

Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02

Posts 138

4 posted 2000-04-12 05:57 AM

dsnyder, Dark Angel, hoot_owl_rn,
Thank you all very much I appreciate your reading and enjoying.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

5 posted 2000-04-12 10:37 AM

Very well written i feel..really liked the rhyme and choice of words.

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02

Posts 138

6 posted 2000-04-12 01:34 PM

Sir Danny, I thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Richter_9
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since 2000-04-09

Posts 41
Whereever I happen to be at the time

7 posted 2000-04-12 05:47 PM

Intriguing words, Esmeralda. A lovely poem.

Rich

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

8 posted 2000-04-12 08:16 PM

This was very good. You describe a romantic moment exquisitely

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

9 posted 2000-04-12 08:31 PM

So wonderfully exquisite

Jeffrey

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