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two lil poems by me
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two lil poems by me |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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When I Think About You I think of sunny days Running through the park And passionate displays Lying in the dark Of a candelit night A sudden gust of wind You saying it's alright It doesn't have to end When the only light remains Cut deeply into your eyes Neither one of us complains Hearing other lovers cry Faith in You I can't do what the others do It's too late for me I can only ask of you Will you wait for me If you do I promise to Make the world of you And the sky Won't ask me why I base the world on you I dip my hand into a silver stream And I drink of you I slip my mind into and endless dream And I think of you < !signature--> All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. Enjoyed. |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Awww.....how sweet! I enjoyed these poems!  Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I'm stunned by the tenderness in these poems. Particularly touched by these words "I dip my hand into a silver stream And I drink of you I slip my mind into an endless dream And I think of you" these are words as beautiful as any ever written. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx mike bobby and rosemary yuh these lil ditties are couple my lil faves...greeting card companies here i come or yuh All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Neato..... I like the last stanza best...  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW Walt! This is fantastic bud! What a romantic <*\\\>< YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Walt...you're turning into a sentimental fool on me here with all this romance stuff....and I like it |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
yep yep yep, definately a hopeless romantic These are great walt |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Walt! I, too, like the last stanza the best! Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
two lil poems by me |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Nice flow and great thoughts. Love them. Keep on writing! |
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