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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-04-11 10:16 PM


As though a tempest tempting vessels,
Your eyes in whirlpools submerge
The open field, the school, the church,
Consuming matter, sparing essence.

No poet’s words have ever traced
Those eyes as closely as your cup.
Your lips dissolved, in every drop
They left a charming after-taste.



 "I will not whole die, my soul in sacred lyre, will outlive my dust and will escape decay,
And in the moonlit sphere, my glory will not tire
As long as poets still remain" A. Pushkin



© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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1 posted 2000-04-11 10:19 PM


Master,
Like this a lot.  Nice images here.  Great job!!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Master
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2 posted 2000-04-11 11:37 PM


Thank you Lone Wolf!
Denise
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3 posted 2000-04-12 10:46 AM


Very nice, Master!

Denise

Master
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4 posted 2000-04-12 03:06 PM


Thank you Denise!
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