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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-04-11 08:58 PM


A restless breeze
came with spring
and I rained tears
of joy
of fright--
Breathless--
in a child's delight--
a spirit dance of song sincere,
spot-lit stars blind eyes too near.

I had to stop to simply breathe,
confused by maze of tantric tease:
clutched pillow of familiar plight.
Mantra sung:  "Make it alright..."

   Flash in brain--
   and o' the pain:
"I can't claim love and live in fear."
A child again, to whisper "Friend,
but please don't leave me here..."

STILL NOW.

Still, I feel you, over there.
(and 'o i know you know i do...}
You are There.
Like I am here.
Wishing me to you.

Even if too good for truth,
if sudden dies the breeze,
hear the hum of sweet refrain:
"You taught me, Dance, Sincere."


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Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-04-11 09:22 PM


A rose we send to you this night
a note attached to shed some light
We read your thoughts and dream a sight
the same as yours
who knows
it might
~
But irregardless
either way
It matters not just what you say
but what you feel
that makes our day

Havn't been around much lately ... might have missed some of your poems ... been really busy and only get a little time these days ... might not have internet much longer
sorry to say ... but I'll be back when ever I can

Rex}>{{{{o>

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-04-11 09:44 PM


Rex--if I've learned nothing else here-I've learned faith...you will be here--spirit shining!  Count on me to keep that faith.
Much love and grats to you, m'friend...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-04-11 10:17 PM


A restless breeze
came with spring
and I rained tears
of joy
of fright--
Breathless--
in a child's delight--
a spirit dance of song sincere,
spot-lit stars blind eyes too near.
-----------------

big ole sweet serenity *SIGH*

hey you...this is SO exquisite!!
your muse has just been so sweetly inspired these days...to what do we owe this content(smile)...
this poem makes me content
love ya twin-girl
jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-04-12 09:25 AM


Lovely  
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