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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-04-11 05:22 PM




Sleep
  soundly,  
demon free with
       dark shadows
lost, blown
         by the
windmills
       of your mind

      warm
rays of first light
     sun kiss
your wary brow

you awake
liberated from
           evil Passion
   of an angelic
      essence
a spirit released
       lifted
  
You

float high above
     the ground lingering,
        softly smiling

                 and
I melt
   as  radiance falls
             upon me.

Dark Angel



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2000-04-11 05:31 PM


Dark Angel--This is lovely!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-04-11 08:11 PM


There's a delicate, fragile quality to your work lately - I like it very much!  
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-04-11 09:23 PM


I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-04-12 09:00 AM


This is wonderful! What a description you unfold. Calming it is...beautiful Angel!
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2000-04-12 08:34 PM


DarkAngel~
Wow .. that muse is filling
you with beautiful thoughts.
There is a 'magic' in the spell
of this.
Lovely.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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6 posted 2000-04-13 12:38 PM


Very beautiful, Dark Angel!

Denise

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2000-04-13 05:53 PM


Martie thanks you so very much  
---------------
Sharon, thank you, I'm so glad you like it  
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Ruth Thank You Hon  
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Angel thanks sweetie  
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Margey   thanks so much for you lovely reply  
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Thanks again Denise  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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