Open Poetry #6 |
The Poetry Of Hearts |
David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
The Poetry Of Hearts Another stolen moment lost in time And one more precious shortened interlude. Again the taste of love's exquisite rhyme, The poetry of hearts, refreshed, renewed. Although you've gone your essence lingers still And warms me with the sweetest memory, Of love and our surrender to its will, Of pleasures tinged with playful mystery. The agony of untold hours alone Is tempered by the love we shared last night, And so the seeds of rapture surely sown Must burst in fragrant blossoms of delight. Sustained and patient, lest to miss the chance For moments measured solely in romance. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi David, I've missed your beautiful poetry lately...This one is exquisite!!! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This was lovely. You painted a beautiful picture with this one. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
David, this is so very lovely ..... Beautifully crafted ... The last two lines are wonderful .... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I have missed reading your poems...This one makes up for it though, well done, Romantic and lovely! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I saw your name and jumped with joy. What an exquisite poem, as always. Keep them coming Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
BRAVO!! I was waiting for another sonnet from you! Well done, as usual! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
David...this is lovely as always. It's nice to see you back and posting those wonderful sonnets again |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Can I breathe now? This was beautiful~ Marie~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
If you don't mind a masculine point of view, Very nicely done. You do have a way with the sonnet. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*SIGH* well, its official...your are the sonnet prince... and you wear your crown with grace (smile) divine... take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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