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Flutter My Heart
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Flutter My Heart |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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 Feel the pounding within my breast Fluttering heart- Beating faster as I catch glimpse of him. Thunder racing through my veins... Pound hard--pound loud Hear my love... If only he could hear my love. Hold fast dear heart Your pounding dilutes my mind... Clouds my vision. Let me look upon his face- Handsome face from afar. OH! Pound again dear heart! For now I know- I glimpse true love... Pound on--Pound on. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hot-Hot! Got my blood a-boiling! |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Strong poem ,had a nice beat to it,yuck yuck seriously though i enjoyed it, Thanks |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ Enjoyed. Like the reference of 'Thunder racing through my veins' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
THANKS ALL! MARIE |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Like the beat  |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Flutter and pound  ~Thanks Hoot! Marie~ |
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