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devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali

0 posted 2000-04-11 12:50 PM


**Midst the Haze**

Soul denied, shamefully so-
As in truth, pigment grows…

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Shine at night, my hidden star-
Reap a distance, if by far…

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Shattered bits, remnants remain-
As ancient valentine’s disdain…

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Wilted petals, upon sullen cheek-
Of all havoc, love shall reap…

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Questioned eyes, don simple gaze-
Lucks forgets me, midst the haze




 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-11 01:03 AM


Shine at night, my hidden star-
Reap a distance, if by far…
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this is perfect devina... so very good. like the presentation as well.
love your signature...have i told you that before?? lol
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
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Biloxi MS
2 posted 2000-04-11 01:05 AM


thats cool, i like it
Michael
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3 posted 2000-04-11 01:06 AM


i don't think luck has much do do with it, Love.  It's about love, honor, and trust, of which you know you have all I have to offer.  I hope that is enough.


Michael

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-04-11 11:10 AM


Devina...luck may have forgotten you, but your muse most certainly didn't with this one. Very nicely written...love the final lines  

 To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-04-11 11:49 AM


The Lovely Devina has written lovely verse here...sad, tho,--sending smiles across the miles, 'sis'...love to you.
kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
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6 posted 2000-04-11 01:46 PM


i can feel the pain in this piece.  isn't it amazing to have a phone, a computer, all types of ways to connect, and still loneliness wins out over the rest?  i went thru a cycle where all i wrote was sad poems for like 4 years. a friend challenged me to write a happy poem, and amazingly so, it has helped me feel better.  just try it, hon.
Martie
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7 posted 2000-04-11 01:48 PM


Beautifully written poem, devina.
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