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**Midst The Haze**
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**Midst The Haze** |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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**Midst the Haze** Soul denied, shamefully so- As in truth, pigment grows… ****************************** Shine at night, my hidden star- Reap a distance, if by far… ****************************** Shattered bits, remnants remain- As ancient valentine’s disdain… ****************************** Wilted petals, upon sullen cheek- Of all havoc, love shall reap… ****************************** Questioned eyes, don simple gaze- Lucks forgets me, midst the haze Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shine at night, my hidden star- Reap a distance, if by far… --------- this is perfect devina... so very good. like the presentation as well. love your signature...have i told you that before?? lol take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
thats cool, i like it |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
i don't think luck has much do do with it, Love. It's about love, honor, and trust, of which you know you have all I have to offer. I hope that is enough. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Devina...luck may have forgotten you, but your muse most certainly didn't with this one. Very nicely written...love the final lines  To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The Lovely Devina has written lovely verse here...sad, tho,--sending smiles across the miles, 'sis'...love to you. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i can feel the pain in this piece. isn't it amazing to have a phone, a computer, all types of ways to connect, and still loneliness wins out over the rest? i went thru a cycle where all i wrote was sad poems for like 4 years. a friend challenged me to write a happy poem, and amazingly so, it has helped me feel better. just try it, hon. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written poem, devina. |
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