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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2000-04-10 05:36 PM


Words of silence
echo through this lonely room
The sound of her voice
filling it with gloom

I'll never know why
she left me standing in the rain
Crying tears of emptiness
is driving me insane

All I wanted was to love her
never wanted to see her cry
But the day that she walked out
I felt my heart had died

************************************
(continued)

The pain has subsided now
This seems like years ago
But I will never forget her
That's one thing I know

I trusted her with my heart
And she took part of it away
That part has yet to be replaced
Even to this day

I say it is better to have loved and lost
Than to have never loved at all
Cause even when we stumble
The ride is worth the fall

I know there's someone out there
Just waiting for me
And someday I will find her
Cause it is meant to be

This is a continuation of Words Of Silence written
several years after the fact.


[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 04-11-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-04-10 06:01 PM


beautiful of your heart jeff,
as the poem continues so does our search for love... very nice work..
take care, jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


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2 posted 2000-04-10 06:49 PM


Thanks Janet,
My search for true love has ended I think and hope.
Part 3 may be coming soon?

Jeffrey

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3 posted 2000-04-10 09:18 PM


Jeffery....never give up that hope
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4 posted 2000-04-10 11:16 PM


Ruth,
Thank you for the encouragement

Jeffrey

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5 posted 2000-04-10 11:29 PM


Very nice, Jeffrey!

Denise

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6 posted 2000-04-11 12:34 PM


maybe it will be a little easier to understand since i put them together
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