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TerryW
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA

0 posted 2000-04-10 03:55 PM


Moonlight

Twilight softly falls
Without making a sound
The stars above are shining
Onto the dew soaked ground.

A cool breeze blows
Across my mortal frame
Whistling gently through the trees
As I wait to see you again.

The light from the silvery moon
Hails your return to me
Your beauty and your grace
Are for my eyes only to see.

Your radiant face shines
In the light of the moon
And I ask you for this dance
For I know you will be gone soon.

I gently take you into my arms
And we dance through the crisp night air
For as long as you are holding me
I am free, without a care.

To the music of the wind
Whispering through the trees
We dance the night away
Our spirits soaring free.

Oh, how I long to remain
In your loving embrace
But I know in my heart
That you cannot stay.

And so, with the fading
Of the silvery moonbeams
I kiss you softly goodbye, until tomorrow,
When I will see you in my dreams.

Terry Woodson



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

© Copyright 2000 Terry A. Woodson, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
NamelessOne
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1 posted 2000-04-10 04:04 PM


In the world of dreams anythings possible, thanks Terry i enjoyed that.Great poem
mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
2 posted 2000-04-10 05:32 PM


I like this a lot~

Marie~
(I had to take the time to read your poem before heading out to class- I love your talent!)

RainbowGirl
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3 posted 2000-04-10 05:54 PM


This was just what I needed to read...

HUGS

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-04-10 05:58 PM


*SIGH*
wow this is so pretty to read...lovely on the eyes and mind.(smile)
very very well written Terry...
be very proud of this!!
take care, jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


TerryW
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA
5 posted 2000-04-10 06:30 PM


Nameless One,
thank you for taking the time to read my work.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.


Marie,
It always makes me feel good to hear from you
dear!  Thanks....


Rainbow,
Good to see you dear!  Thanks for the hugs --- I'm sending them right back at you!!  


Janet Marie,
     Thank you for the lovely comment.  I am proud when I know that I give some enjoyment to all of you, dear friends.    

Love Ya~!

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Jeffrey Carter
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6 posted 2000-04-10 06:52 PM


Well crafted as well as well rounded.
Truly magnificent.

Jeffrey

Martie
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7 posted 2000-04-10 07:53 PM


So sweet and lovely....sigh
weaubleau
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8 posted 2000-04-10 08:01 PM


reminded me of a peom that i had written and then forgotten about.  i'll have to dig that one up and post it...

thanks so much.  

beautiful writing.

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-04-10 08:51 PM


TerryWoodson~
Sweetheart ... with beauty like this
you can dance in my moonlight
ANY NIGHT OF THE WEEK !  

This is 'swooning' material.
*swoon*
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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10 posted 2000-04-10 10:45 PM


This is beautiful!!! Reminds me of a poem I wrote long ago and brings back many wonderful memories   thank you so much for reminding me and for sharing your gift to write with us.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Denise
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11 posted 2000-04-10 11:24 PM


This is very beautiful, Terry! Just beautiful!

Denise

mariee66
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12 posted 2000-04-11 12:17 PM


Did I mention that I can Waltz to the rythm of the breeze,
Sway under the pale moonlight,
Twirl amongst the stars so bright?

(wink)
  

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
13 posted 2000-04-11 03:55 PM


Jeffrey,
     Thanks so much for reading this one!  It is one of my "spur of the moment improv favorites"!

Martie,
     Thank you.  I am going to blush.

Weaubleau,
     I appreciate your nice comments.  Please do find your poem and post it for us!

Marge~
     Dear, moonlight cannot come soon enough!!!    

ButterfliesDC,
     You always cheer me up when I read your replies.  Thank you for sharing your words of the heart with us, too.

Denise,
     Thank you very much, dear!

Mariee~~~
     We may have to have a dance ourselves sometime!      

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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Southern Florida
14 posted 2000-04-11 04:13 PM


Absolutely gorgeous Terry .. it left me with soft and oh so tender, feelings ...
Marge is right ... this is "swooning material"

mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
15 posted 2000-04-11 06:08 PM


Dance we shall  

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
16 posted 2000-04-11 08:44 PM


Oh...closing my eyes as we speak here   Hurry up dreams!!!
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