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Torrie Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 19 |
Rain. It's like all risks in life. We're taught to fear it, while in truth it is a beautiful thing. As children we are told of the dangers of catching cold, or being struck by lightning, Yet we are never told of the beauty and relaxation it brings. What can be better than a cool rain on a hot summer day? To let the water flow and drench you from head to toe? To lie in the wet grass and absorb the calmness of the water? It has a powerful, soothing feeling, whose closest imitation is a long, hot shower. It is an awesome thing in it's whole: The heavens opening up to release a shower of comfort, the beauty of the lighting illuminating the sky. the familiar rumble of thunder - God's angels bowling. Rain is a good thing. It is not to be kept outside, while we are all cozy inside our houses. It is meant to commune with us, bring us pleasure, and comfort. It is a beautiful part of nature, not enough enjoyed. |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
I'd have to agree. Of course, I like almost all of nature.... I could do without mosquitos and some other annoyances but rain, and storms and even really strong winds always seem to comfort me. I like it. "We always said it would be good to go away, someday, but if there's nothing there to make things change, if it's the same to you I'll just hang." --Matchbox20 (Hang) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I agree. We are not taught things like that, we all run for cover from it. Thanks for the insight to this! I shall never look at it quite the same  Welcome to Passions!!!<*\\\>< YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. Please check your email for a special welcome. I look forward to reading more from you! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great work Torrie I love this poem Jeffrey |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
no doubt about it! there's nothing i love more than shooting some hoops in the middle of the night as the rain pours down around me. i loved this poem. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
i couldn`t agree more...i just wish it would rain, great first post Torrie ,thanks |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a god poem to enter Passions with. Welcome! I couldn't agree more about it being a beautiful part of nature. I love the rain and how it relaxes me. You described everything wonderfully. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You know, ever since I was a child I loved to play in the rain. It's just seemed to have a calling over me. Wonder entrance you have made, here. Welcome to Passions, I hope to see more from you soon. michael |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
True words you speak! I like the rain too. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Oh The beauty of a thunderstorm. Violent yet calming. Lightening flickering across the sky and the wonderous smell of rain. Truly a great work! Welcome to Passions, hope you enjoy your stay. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I just LOVE the rain. I tried to explain the feeling to a friend of mine but couldn't quiet find the words. Now I'll just send them to see your work, you have said it very well. Welcome to Passions< !signature-->Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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Torrie Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 19 |
Thank you All So much for your comments. I was so thrilled when I saw all the great things you had to say. This is the first piece I've ever shared & the feedback was a really great way to start out. Thanks again! -TORRIE- |
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Ladyhawk Junior Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 18Brownsville, TN -USA- |
Beautiful poem! Ladyhawk |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
I like this one a lot. Rain has always been special to me. Rich |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Torrie~Welcome! I for one, LOVE the rain...it releases a joy from my heart that only the ocean can come close to.Great poem. -SEA |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Wonderful poem, Torrie! I like to take walks in the rain...and I love the fresh, clean smell after a rainstorm. Thanks for sharing, and welcome to the Passions family!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very true and well expressed. Rain is very calming and soothing as is your verse. Wonderful! Liz |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Torrie, This is so wonderful, nature has a way of letting us know she's there and that we can take part in her beauty any time. Welcome to passions Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I happen to love the rain Welcome to passions |
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