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Dreams Come True |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Girl, I love you so much now it would be hard to say good-bye You are the ONE I've been dreaming about for all of my life And all that time I never thought my dreams would come true But lady now I know they have 'cause I found my dreams in you |
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ElektraXOXO Junior Member
since 2000-04-07
Posts 30San Antonio Tx |
How incredibly sweet, and straight fromyour heart, I love it!!!  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
you could be a song writer...do you sing? or play guitar? "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
jeff you write another zinger! whomever this lady is best wake up and appreciate what she has! i wish you both the best of luck and love! take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks for the kind words Elektra Romantic Heart ...this actually started out as a song, but was never finished....i play guitar , but not sing Aimster ....thanks for the encouraging words , but the girl this was for is long since gone.....=( Thanks again everyone! Jeffrey |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Nice heart felt piece. I am sorry that she is no longer the inspiration for you dreams.  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, This was so sweet. Sorry to hear that she is gone. looks like she let a good one slip away. Hang in there....you never know when those dreams will reappear....with the right one this time. Excellent work!!Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh, this is a sweet poem. I'm glad that, in a way, your dreams have come true. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sweet, Jeffrey! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) The song of love....this is very well done, and made me remember similar feelings and promises. Thank you for the reminded and thank you for sharing.Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is very sweet |
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