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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Question I have a question I would ask of all. How do you deal with a girl too tall? She always looks down and I up in stare, We're only equal when we sit in a chair. It's fine when we eat and I, in a seat. We talk and we laugh, it's really a treat. The bad part comes when we stand up straight, That's the part gets me and I really hate. But it's not that bad I must confess, For there are times when we both undress. And lying in bed just nullifies all, Forget about tall, I thank God I am small. On second thought, forget your suggestions, Thinking on it, I withdraw the question. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Very cleverly done. Exceptional piece. Jeffrey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Delightfully fun. But, I can't wait until Balladeer gets hold of this one ! !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL you did me in with this one...cant even type for laughing... and YES, I cant wait till Balladeer replies LOL... you slay me Sy  To be short can be a pain, tis true but it don't seem to be a real hinderence to you. What you may lack in lofty height... you make up for in poetic might. NOW get your eyes OUT of there, didnt you mother teach you not to stare? While you think you may have the best view... you better be careful... those babies are loaded and pointing at you!!! jm |
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ElektraXOXO Junior Member
since 2000-04-07
Posts 30San Antonio Tx |
Always a smile I can see you will bring to my face More poems please For I can not do with just a taste  I loved it!  [This message has been edited by ElektraXOXO (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
No questions asked No answers given The point is made Succinctly driven One little question Of bemuse Who in the heck is This poet's muse Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeffrey, My sons name is Jeffrey. Thank you for the nice comment. Marge, Glad I made you laugh, God bless, *L* Janet, Good advice, good insight, enjoyed your reply. *L* Elektra, Very sweet comment, thank you. Elizabeth, This poets muse is a figment. A whimsy of his lament. Sy |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
WELL DONE! I really enjoyed the whole thing. I am glad that you finaly came to your senses in the end. All kidding aside, through the years I have seen the truth of, "Beauty is skin deep but uglyness goes to the bone." I now close my eyes and look HARD at the heart before forming an opinion. INclan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
INclan, Good thinking and thanks for the nice comment. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, I enjoyed this lightheaded-er-hearted piece of whimsy. Delightful, naturally, as is always your poetic indicia. ~ Claire |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And I've a query of more import'-- what does one do with a girl too short?" oh lawd, gawd, sy , I am so sorry... I'm naughty, i am...but i exit laughing... |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
You know I never read those guidlines but I bet there is something in there against what I was gonna say... Anyways... loved it. Laughed the whole way through it. I'd write a witty cryptic response but I'm not tht tallented as of yet. "We always said it would be good to go away, someday, but if there's nothing there to make things change, if it's the same to you I'll just hang." --Matchbox20 (Hang) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, As always I enjoyed your comment. *L* Serenity, Good question, good thought, I imagine it works in reverse? *L* White Nite, Glad you enjoyed the poem, I like to get a little light once in a while. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, I know you withdrew the question but I still must say - they can never be TOO tall if you ask me. Great poem, Sy. Michael |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is too funny, Sy! Denise |
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