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Happiness In The End
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Happiness In The End |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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I lie awake in a world filled with dreams < !signature-->But dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep And every now and then a special dream comes along One that will be remembered 'til the dreamer's day's are through If we don't give up on chasing them, they just might come true Along our journey to finding them we may stumble and fall But in the end we can still be happy 'cause at least we gave our all [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"But dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep" very cool line...very well written poem I like your style of writing...more words of wisdom. take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I'm a firm believer that persistance pays~ Good job with this one~ Marie~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks JM & Marie , I really needed to hear that. Jeffrey |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Jeff this really was a great piece..flowed along so pretty! you have a style of writing that i very much like as well. keep up the great work. will continue to look forward to reading more from you. take care, amy p.s. thanks for your lovely comment to my poem. *HUGS* ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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