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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
She comes to me in quiet time a vesper of pure air Let naught encroach her sanctity or cause her to have care Un-bidden form of plentitude imagined never seen To rule my feeble efforts as subject to her queen A voice that's never strident yet commands me all the same Guides movement just as surely without knowing whence it came I cherish what she shows me in moments all too brief The words though given freely echo as I were a thief A life will come between us this is known but never said She comes to me in quiet time her voice within my head |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
It's always a pleasure to read what your muse and you write ..  This is no acception ... Wonderful, Dr. Moose |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well written. I enjoyed the read. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Pepper& Mike, I am reasonably convinced that at times we all hear voices . Well maybe that's not so reasonable , but at least I do . What we choose to do with them has alot to do with who we are .I liken this phenomena to what some refer to as automatic writing . Where this comes from I have no idea , but I do know that it allows me a glimpse of what I may yet become , and I welcome it whole-heartedly .(pretty heavy for a guy with a name like Dr. Moose huh ?) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dr.Moose~ This one definitely speaks my name. I am the constant receiver of the voices. They come unbidden and softly whisper the thoughts that I pen. It is a feeling of awe when I glance and view the lovely thoughts they've left upon my page. Wonderfully done. A blessing to you for sure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful Dr.Moose! I also love it when I hear those voices and the words just flow automatically onto the paper! Those are my most fulfilling times, I think! Denise |
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