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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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i have something to offer you it's not very old, it's somewhat new it can't be borrowed, but it's sometimes blue it's only been given to a very select few you can't buy it in a store it's been known to open the door it's the center, my life's core and just when you think it's out of what it holds, there's more so, here it is, it's no work of art it's one piece, no moving parts it's where life begins, and where love starts you hold it now in your hands . . . it's my heart. . . . . . please be gentle. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
So true! Our hearts... the most fragile part of our beings...  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mmmmm...most romantic! Very nice poem Sir Sven!  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Excellent Sven, I hope they handle it gently*S* The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful poem of devotion Sven... only TLC for that kind heart of yours... take care,jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-sven this is beautiful!! as is all of your work. so touching and breathtaking! what lovelier gift than a heart...especially yours...one that is so kind and generous! this was beautiful my friend...simply beautiful! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all again. . . PC, yes indeed. . . fragile like the rain deVine, thank you your highness, this poet gratefully accepts your praise. . . Danel, I hope so too. . . Janet, thank you. . .for yours too, I hope. . Amy, thank you so much!! You're making me blush. . .always good to know that what I write touches so many. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
simply sighs..Sven... |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
great writing! what better gift could ever be given? |
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