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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Remember < !signature-->Spring is a miracle when ever it happens buds break robins return and ever so softly wellcome as I was in courage by a fiend to be gone this journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you into a piece full come for table ground but if you no thing like me you be tried of the same mold contempt or airy voids that sneaks to glory fly woke gather then tall ants which draft tick ally skewers art and graces such in dived level souls with the drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart con trash to ease kind of odor ease very same will not rest pond to a poets rule of dumb which pears to be just act ally what they lethal ridge ally cordon wit newt protest or sin sure as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough will fat make it add mire able odor I weight for the voids to rule ball looming nocturne ally true in neat..? [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ It matters not the years of your calendar, with beauties like this ... you are forever young ! This is so replete with imagery. You are doing some marvelous poetry, my friend. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
You painted a beautiful picture here, Lucky, with such vivid imagery ..... Perfect !!!! "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars." _Les Brown_ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Lucky~ I felt like I was "in" this piece. Wonderful imagery you have done here. You have a refreshing style and i agree with marge, doesn't matter the number of years you are. age is just a number...i know a major cliche but it's the truth! take care amy  < !signature-->~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky--this is full of beautiful images and words placed just so in that lucky tangle of thought and the last lines were perfect, bringing back humanness and you...even if you are wise not old you are a super poet and man... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
You know what..! You guy's are the real miracle. Rosemary is over there trying to climb out of my poem but says she got a good one stewin'. I thank you all so much. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your poem sings of simplicity, awareness, anticipation, childlike wonderment, and the beauty of what it all means to a sensitive soul. I enjoyed this very much! ~ Claire |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Sweet memories pouring over me in the power of your words. What a gift! I think this is one of your best, though there are so many of your best, it's hard to determine! But honestly, those surprise endings! I don't know! (Just teasing, you know!) Your descriptions of the sights and sounds of springs from seasons of life unending, are so vivid and rich. |
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