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I Feel The Breeze
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I Feel The Breeze |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Deep into the forest glade, Underneath the willow shade, My body feels the breeze, Misty dew drops falling around, barefoot feet touching the ground, My body feels the breeze, Running through the lilly field, As my body yeilds, My body feels the breeze, Moonlight shadows falling around, Lying in the clover I am found, My body feels the breeze, I close my eyes, I feel you here, Come Whisper all around me, Come whisper in my ear, underneath the tree, Gently breathe upon me, Inhale all of me you see, I stand here in your mist, As you blow all over me your kiss, From my head to my feet, Surrounded by you I am complete, Sometimes your just a tease, But I love to feel the breeze.... "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Don't tell any of my male friends i said this, but this is SO romantic. Can almost feel the breeze from your expression. very, very nice (and that's no tease) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Romantic Heart- this was simply wonderful and romantically beautiful! i liked the images that you you so poetically described here. your way with words is very powerful! amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Danny:I bet you are a tease...with words of poetry...haha  Thank you deniseI can always count on you to read my poems...thank you! Aim:thanks for the compliment,Words are powerful...and combined with poetic expression they are dynomite! |
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