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Lost Voice |
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CupidyCassie New Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 5NJ |
The knife slid across my face No one anywhere that I could embrace I tried to scream but no one would hear I was frozen in dreadful fear My time left seemes too short to tell I was in some deep, dark cell He frightened me with every move that he made My life was really starting to fade I knew I was somewhere under the ground It would surely take a long time for my body to be found The blade punctured my skin My voice became very grim I didn't think it could ever happen to me He whispered, "I wonder who my next victim will be?" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wow!!! You gave me chills clean to the bone. Powerful writing!! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Chilling to say the least! I've never written anything this spooky, but this is very dark and scarey! My worst fear is being buried alive, I think. This spooked me like that. AAaaaaahh!! |
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