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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 2000-04-06 07:55 PM


My Mind Is Being Tethered

My mind is being
tethered
Confusion battling
sanity
I feel emotional
nonsense
Flaming darts abuse
burns
Twisted tight bows
knotting
Angels knocking
I can't hear
Clock ticks I've no
concept
Eyes see yet no
connection
Mouth speaks words
stumble
Heart beat sings
out of tune
Feet walk blindly
past reality
Mirror reflects
frequent stranger



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-06 09:13 PM


Some days are like that. Great writing, Gloria!

Denise

Elizabeth
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2 posted 2000-04-06 09:46 PM


Yes, I've had plenty of days like that myself. So here are some smiles for you...

              

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 2000-04-06 11:11 PM


Denise: Thank You, it was one of those days when my emotions took over my mind for a spell and I was like batter in mixing bowl.

Elizabeth: Thank You so much, the smiles made me smile, great therapy.  

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4 posted 2000-04-07 12:54 PM


Oh, mine never gets tied up...just lost every once in a while  
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5 posted 2000-04-07 04:13 AM


LostDreamer~
I enjoyed the phrase
'Mirror reflects
frequent stranger'

LOL @ 'batter in a mixing bowl'
Been there .. got whipped !
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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