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~Summer's Desire~
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~Summer's Desire~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Summer's Desire~ Music plays, our bodies sway ... summer breezes tease our skin. Sand in my hair, here on a dare ... feeling the glow of your touch within. Starlit skies, moonlit eyes ... consumed in anticipation of this embrace. Candles burn, our bodies yearn ... shadows dance upon your tanned, amazing face. Taste and kiss, know this bliss ... we've longed for this moment in time. Come to me, this is meant to be ... your many pleasures so sublime. Secrets shared, confessions spared ... contentment flows so pure and sweet. Midnight desire, feel this fire ... together we conduct heat. Gentle lips on mine, so divine ... I surrender to your touch. Cant fight fate, this need too great ... I've never wanted any one before -- so much. Take me there, all that I am, I share ... of your offerings I am bound. Love of lust, held in trust ... true ecstasy finally found. Janet Marie for my partner in rhyme  The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Janet, If is was your intention to steam up the forum, you have succeeded. I think this is well written. Good luck with your Summer. I must admit that the passions of Summer are sweet. However, at my age, I prefer the stability of Fall. INclan |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Ah, i get to be the first to lump praise on this one. Sooooooo sensual. Sweet music to the ears. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Shadows dance upon your tanned, amazing face"...if love is based on admiration and trust..as I believe it is...this tango dance has begun. Lovely..lovely..lovely..James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtaking, Janet Marie!! Very very nice!! Denise |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Music plays, our bodies sway ... summer breezes tease our skin. Sand in my hair, here on a dare ... feeling the glow of your touch within. Starlit skies, moonlit eyes ... consumed in anticipation of this embrace. Candles burn, our bodies yearn ... You are steaming up the passions for sure janet. I could go on with more lines, but those first ones....steamy...*L* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
HOT! That was my first initial reaction to this poem!! This one is quite breathtaking...makes me wish summer was here NOW lol. I must go now and wipe off my computer screen...for it is still blazing with words of passion! Take care... Love ya AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very passionate, My dear, I wonder how you could write so beautifully through all that? WEll written and smooth from beginning to end. It is a wonderful poem. I like the inner rhyming, very well done Liz |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Is it HOT in here???? Janet Marie* This is extraordinary!!!! You captured each touch, each feeling, each heartbeat...I loved this side of your poetry!!!! Now pardon me while I go open some windows cuz you fogged up my screen...lol Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you guys are making me blush big time...and Im loving it (smile) I'm glad to know I can steam sombodys screen still. *S* thank you for sharing the "pleasure" you find in this...I know it was my pleasure to write it...as was its moment of inspiration...*SIGH* LOL THANK YOU to ALL of you. Liz...thank you for noticing the rhyme thru all the steam LOL...I am humbled by compliments from a poet of your grace. truly. take care all, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
What did I tell you about trying out the Romance novel writing industry??? Great poem, just in time for the season(well, a tease for the upcoming season) |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
Great, Sensual, Rhyming, Steaming.....I could go on and on...very refreshing poem indeed! Luv, neitham |
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